AnnMarie Eldon


rests
1 field 'system'


driven and driven through furrowed browns ahedged
by rhoes, which, formalised, symbolise the War Dead

but spring does not remember cold death
its dearth of joy to come frozen as it were

by some other season's values
and then there's dubium, named after its long head:

this distinction not a car-given thing
but referenced. A make-over about to happen

horse chestnut has turned to rags, a tree-drop
knot rug, which, yes, can be spotted and driven

upon. The greater fallen cordoned off
in farer fields marked by no birds' song, long,

long gone and driven underground, a former
generation, many freezes, many thaws

'The Field Guide' shows five different poppies
I shall never feel driven to visit millions, five

or otherwise; graves, their bloodshed
lingering and dung


2
tree, free and TV

rabid, a once miniature spruce
has molared its 2 by 1 by 3 house-brick enclosure

from the freebie bowl, another miniature reads "Delicate Care" and turning over
:ammonium laureth sulphate, ammonium lauryl sulphate,
cocamidolpropyl betain, coconut monoethanolamide,
citric acid, disodium EDTA,
sodium chloride, perfume,
dyestuff, preservative,
water

on TV, a lean soldier bites the bullet for the crew
ceremoniously carrying a booby trap bomb
to roadside disposal. He

owes more to up-line responsibility
than any sovereign nature
hard line discipline or
soft marketability
could account

there's no list
no fresh...
no reverse

I saw, dig, turn off
carve saw carve saw
break root discrepancy
until growth cracks and the salt spore cycle finally breaks

wash
make dirt good
fake doubt clean

3
play/sleep


borage that there is, looped bent by rain's
bash, its blue droophead held by a cane hoop

and bugloss pricking up well from a storm,
a storm of shade, a pallid storm afternoon

and a trapped bee spat taps and swoons
a mood. A singularity suddenly suppressed

drift chat, quick kick laugh snatched from the street
into an-un-slow doze, wherefore no greys, no

shades (yet dreamt hiking the Ridgeway route)
but thought delays panicked back 'n forth. Grass

sloppings, which do not half-life, but decay
their unserious selvage to be cleared

self shoring these future scattereds
a day's rules diablowed as if scentelves

could lavish some transcendental hint
within the minced mind's pilgrimage


AnnMarie Eldon was born in Birmingham, England. She has divided homes and irony between the US and UK and travelled India, the Himalayas and Asia. She now attempts her escape from mediocrity within the confines of a picturesque Oxfordshire town, juggling hormones, various children, dogs and personae interiorae.

Her work was, is or will be at
Can We Have Our Ball Back, Del Sol Review, elimae, Melic Review and many other places. She is a 2004 Pushcart Prize nominee and is published by Anchor Books, Forward Press and Triumph House.